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Practice is EVERYTHING in art, my old teacher said, and he knows what hes talkin about (he is an artist and even gets paid for his drawings
The part that jumped into my eye in an instant was this time the hair - it looks REALLY cool i defenititely like it, maybe the best part of the picture.
But, i will try to be honest with you (no point in waving around sweets) what irritates me is:
the body proportions, they dont fit exactly in some points, thats the point i would say to improve first if you want to improve something.
Her left arm for example looks a bit twisted and she is more thin then i like it
The other parts of her body are quite good, everything above her breasts(and those included) look really good and i wont change anything on that, least of all the hair (did i already mentioned it? it rocks!).
Background looks fanatstic, it leaves enough room for imagination, but the viewer (or at least i) really gets the idea behind it, it couldnt have been really better to make you imagine some hot and hostile place.
At the end i want to say: dont be discouraged if i may sounded a bit harsh in one or two points, i REALLY like the picture, definitely one of your best works until now and it shows your improvement.
PS: I didnt watched this out of my watching list, I was just interested in it at my 4-5times daily search for good succubi pictures and it appeared to be from you
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As every real artist could say - you learn nothing from applouds, but a well placed criticism can teach you a great lesson. No offence taken, truthfully, I'm beyond of arrogance that may say to you that you are the best. EVERY picture has flaws, even Mona Lisa has them. Anyway, I'm still proud of this one.
I didn't use much lightning on the skin because it would make her stand out too strongly over the scenery, although it could seem more realistic on that way. The other reason was that the leathery wings has no lightning and I wanted to make it look as I made the wings and the body in same technique that's not the case. Maybe the best place of improvement will be the black borders of skin that could have some colors and lightning. I believe that is the weakest point of my picture.
Hmm... I'm not sure about the wrong twists of the hand - a human hand can bend on very wierd looking curves that may seem a bit flawed on the drawings. At least I tried to take an example for my own hands, and I'm pretty sure that my hand can bend normally on that state. As a matter in fact I can bend my elbow back, beyond zero angle. What a weirdo I am.
You are sure about the waist, it could be wider if someone prefer more curvy models and womens with signs of womanhood, and the waist really look like quite thin in this partly picture where the waist were cutted in the middle and no feet are present. Lenne uses Numbian clothes (a desert kingdom of Andaya) thus I wanted to make her look more like an Arabian or an Asian than a westerner, because of that she is slimmer than people in Europe usually are. Their waist is also slimmer and not so curvy as a women in Europe for example. I guess that the wideness of the waist more distinctive trait, not a flaw. Certainly, we all have our favourite types of bodies. I can admit that I am crazy for Japanese women and their looks.
I also thought a moment of making her clothing look like this [link] but I gladly decided to retreat on that plan. The other scheme was to create lots of golden threads hanging under the bra, but I discarded that too for unnecessery detail.
I'm with you that the hair (and face at all) is the best part of this picture. That was the first thing I did in more detail and I used a couple of hours just to make it look like that (it was a pretty hard to make with oil brush). I also like the red light that is strainering on the left side. Also the red clouds on the middle were success.
The next character will be either Dhanne or Galed, I wonder which one I make first. Dhanne looks more Scandinavian or European, and Galed is more like an Arabian, and should have an appearance much like this guy
PS. I'm a bit annoyed because I didn't want that 'Buy This Print' sign to appear there. I have no intention to sell it, just the novels behind of these pictures. I hope that it's not necessary to show that sign there on the future drawings.
The reason I put the bra on her was so simple as I suppose it's easier to publish "decent" pictures than half-naked ones because teens may be readers as well as adults.
many women look better/sexier with a bit clothing than completly naked
but i wont have that problem, just because of my style it will be impossible to get a below 16 rating. If something like that exists, never seen a book with a rating here in germany. But on second thought.... Well, i know my countrymen well enough to know, that it WILL exist, germany is a bit special about rules^^ (did you know? 80% of the written tax laws in the WHOLE world is written in german, and only germany writes in german...
It is because of Ann... she is quite cruel (so a human would say) her way of killing people is like watching a butcher - fast and efficient without any traces of hesitation or mercy and i dont have any problems with going into detail. The reader actually SHOULD disgust the way she is working.
At my criticisim point i was talking about the arm, not the hand (which came out quite good) it looked twisted when i watched it on my notebook, but here at home everything looks fine (may caused by my notebooks screen, it got some very different settings on gammar etc, i cant even identify some previews of pictures i have already seen on it).
So with this second look on it there isnt any criticism left, you intended to draw her waist like that and if she came out like you intended, everything is ok with that
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I suppose there are more restricting laws in German than there are in Finland, for example the PC/console games use green blood instead of red blood because you get the red one banned. It sounds a bit naïve and unnecessary law of me. Nice facts that I wasn't aware of before.
Anyway, I got the picture that your novel will a bit more brutal and merciless than mine, mostly because I have typical human heroes as well as demons and other beastial characters. I suppose there is no reasonable option to write on demon protagonists in a good light or they being demons but good demons. It feels ridiculous or pointless at least - why to bring evil characters that aren't really evil? Your brutal choice was the right one for considering on that you are concentrating on demons and evil itself.
In the series of mine there are also some parts that have battles with a bit more than a hint of brutal carnage and there are also chapters that focuses on despair and hopelessness where even the mightiest character of the party - Jarahle who is in his bear form almost invincible in normal fights - will be in trouble. Those chapters of despair the whole party will fight for their lives or just run away like in the marches of Mordael fighting against undead, where they are trying to get out of the swamp as fast as possible. The most extreme case of despair will be the fight against the basilisk...
Every time someone was able to trick the law in some way, or someone found something that isnt regulated by a rule or law and he thought it should, someone had to make a law for it... :>
Its crazy, just crazy. But we germans (or at least most of us) want it that way... Sometimes its also funny xD
And yes, i want to make sure that no one gets a wrong idea about ann - she IS evil, not good in any way but its not as easy as most people would think, i mean: being evil.
Just think about it, most "evil" persons/creatures have nearly no, or just a vague reason for being evil. "He is born evil and keeps it, he just hates everything..." Thats so boring :> every bandit got his own story, and a reason why he acts like he does, and so, even ann needs a reason to act like that.
Her reason for being cruel is easy: a human would hestitate to kill another human, but you wouldnt hesitate to kill, for example, a deer or whatever, if you got used to it. She doesnt treats humans as equivalent to herself, so why show mercy?
Also the talking part. Why does the evil one always have to talk with the "hero" of the story instead of stabbing him into the back? When she got the chance to (and she really got some advantages that give her the chance to) she just brutally murders her victims, strangulating, stabbing, ambush, choke them to death in their sleep, set them on fire... Everything that goes well and leaves her unharmed is ok.
I dont know why, but i kind of enjoy the parts when Ann/Meru got beat up a bit harder, having some pain and being really hurt takes away much of that feeling of invicibility most of the heroes in the stories got attached to them. They also lost most of their fights in the beginning, and are still losing some more, it just isnt interesting in my opinion to read a book which is that easy structured, that you know: somehow, they will win every fight, and everyone will survive.
I will try later (its planned on second/third novel) to write about a party, i think its quite different from writing just about one person. It may be hard to give every chracter the attention he deserves, but also give a few chances of better perspectives.
But im writing too much again
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It looks like you just used the oil bursh with minimum size and round about 4-5 different colours, maybe smudge/push a little bit here and there to stretch it...
The main problem is, making it look like hair, and not just a big flat part of colour, if you know what i mean.
(that part was somehow way easier with pencil and paper, my pencil hair looks quite good, while psp9 hair sucks, pencil wings are ok, and psp9 wings are awesome...
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